With a few modifications, like stealing Lonks use of a (instead of " ") as a separator, which was very smooth, here's an updated version of Allens's code with a score 233

Code:

function f($)
dim $h,$c,$o,$t,$a
$f=ubound($)
do
$h=$c+1
do
$a=$[$c]+$[$h]
if len($a)=2*len(join($,""))/($f+1)
$o=$o + a +$a+ a+ $[$h]+$[$c]
endif
$h=$h+1
until $h>$f
$c=$c+1
until $c=$f
for each $ in split($o,a)
$h=ubound(split($o,$))
if $h>$t
$t=$h
$f=$
;endif
;next
endfunction